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Nice.
The wording kinda needs work(i'm MidnightVampricKisses from GoMANGA Forums btw and I presume this is a one shot)like instead of saying 'They say he is wondering at midnight' you should say 'They say he wanders here at Midnight', change 'A man rumored to be a ghost' to 'A man who stalks like a ghost', and change 'a man who seek for someone between the shadows to 'A man who stalks within the shadows'. I'm not telling you it's bad but these are just suggestions in case you ever want to turn this one shot into a on going series. ^_^
I LOVE the backgrounds!
The wording kinda needs work(i'm MidnightVampricKisses from GoMANGA Forums btw and I presume this is a one shot)like instead of saying 'They say he is wondering at midnight' you should say 'They say he wanders here at Midnight', change 'A man rumored to be a ghost' to 'A man who stalks like a ghost', and change 'a man who seek for someone between the shadows to 'A man who stalks within the shadows'. I'm not telling you it's bad but these are just suggestions in case you ever want to turn this one shot into a on going series. ^_^
I LOVE the backgrounds!